So what if I’m broken?
It’s not like you care.
You wouldn’t take me to your home
And fix me up there.
For the fact of the matter,
So sadly I say,
Is you were the one,
Who made me this way.
My tears and frustration,
You couldn’t take it anymore.
So you packed up your things,
And walked out the door.
“It’s not you, it’s me”
Was the lie I was told.
But that line I tired,
Cliché`, and old.
Your words are like a sword,
Piercing through the night.
But when it’s all said and done,
Will everything be right?
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I'm certain that true love exists. How could I feel something that doesn't exist?
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a couple years of up all night, and a few thoulsand dipers later, that mistake he thought he made covers up the refridgerator.
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It dseno't mtaetr in waht oerdr the ltteres in a wrod are, the olny iproamtnt tihng is taht the frsit and lsat ltteer be in the rghit pclae. The huamn mnid deos not raed ervey lteter by istlef, but the wrod as a wlohe. Can you raed tihs?
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they're like brenda and eddie, only they will survive. and they're not the popular steady. or the king and the queen of the prom. and they cant drive around town with the car top down and the radio on since neither of them have a car.... or a licence...
You should submit it to MUSE.
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It dseno't mtaetr in waht oerdr the ltteres in a wrod are, the olny iproamtnt tihng is taht the frsit and lsat ltteer be in the rghit pclae. The huamn mnid deos not raed ervey lteter by istlef, but the wrod as a wlohe. Can you raed tihs?
okay. i will.
maybe.
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they're like brenda and eddie, only they will survive. and they're not the popular steady. or the king and the queen of the prom. and they cant drive around town with the car top down and the radio on since neither of them have a car.... or a licence...
YOU SHALLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111
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It dseno't mtaetr in waht oerdr the ltteres in a wrod are, the olny iproamtnt tihng is taht the frsit and lsat ltteer be in the rghit pclae. The huamn mnid deos not raed ervey lteter by istlef, but the wrod as a wlohe. Can you raed tihs?
i shall.
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they're like brenda and eddie, only they will survive. and they're not the popular steady. or the king and the queen of the prom. and they cant drive around town with the car top down and the radio on since neither of them have a car.... or a licence...
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It dseno't mtaetr in waht oerdr the ltteres in a wrod are, the olny iproamtnt tihng is taht the frsit and lsat ltteer be in the rghit pclae. The huamn mnid deos not raed ervey lteter by istlef, but the wrod as a wlohe. Can you raed tihs?
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